Beginning of a new story

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capo man Dec 10, 2012

Ok so I just started writing a story about a zombie apocolips and this the the beginning
Visɧɓuɱe Dec 10, 2012

Alco-pops. Geez, weren't they banned about 10 years ago or so? But I like the premise of your story man.Zombies as drunk as skunks, and feeding on alco-pops. A 10 for originality.
capo man Dec 10, 2012

The lonely man walked down the street, derelict buildings on ether side. Eyes watching him from the shadows. He sensed movement and loaded his M40A5 sniper and his .44 revolver. A body came running towards him. It's face twisted and covered in blood and boils. He raised his rifle and fired. A bullet fired out the chamber of the rifle and ripped the surviving organs out the zombies chest.
capo man Dec 10, 2012

This is just the beginning but I need more ideas
Visɧɓuɱe Dec 10, 2012

The rifle was faulty. Bloody chamber came off! This is great dude.
capo man Dec 10, 2012

Thank you but I have no more ideas for what could happen next, over the time of me writing this story I will keep of referring back to this for ideas.
Visɧɓuɱe Dec 10, 2012

Pray continue. One can almost smell the tension. Don't leave it hanging like that.
capo man Dec 10, 2012

The zombie fell to the floor, blood squirted out the wound, it mounded, loudly, and drew its last breath. The man stepped back, turned and carried on down the road. A few minutes later, when the man returned to g head back to his safe, and secret, hideout. But on his way down the road, the body of the dead zombie was ripped in- half and covered in scratches and teeth marks. The man knew instantly that more zombies where close, possibly watching him at that very moment. He looked around him, took some meat out his rucksack and placed it in the road. He than pulled out his revolver and walked towards a house. He opened the door and stepped outside. The inside of the house reminded him of his house before all this madness.
capo man Dec 10, 2012

He silently walked up the stairs and into a room facing the road, luckily the window was open. He folded out the bipod on his rifle and waited. The trap was set. A unsuspecting zombie would walk out, looking for fresh meat and then, boom, the rifle will sound and the zombie will fall. Eventually it happened
capo man Dec 10, 2012

I hope this story will become like dayz, with the man having to look for loot and hiding from survivors