🍁 Smoke Till I Die 🎵

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welz Nov 23, 2012

There is this song that a friend and I have created...

http://soundcloud.com/srpsound

the track is named 'smoke till I die'...

WARNING: This is a Smoking Song and has swearing threw out.

He composed the lyrics and I created the tune plus master the damn thing on cubase and reason and with my super cool USB piano... Took me ages!

Please have a listen and let me know what you think, the reason I'm asking you guys is I need honest opinions and my friends are useless!

Thanks! :)
Ꮶ͜иιɢн͡т Nov 23, 2012

I would throw it in my iTunes! 👍 I think there is a whole heap of potential. Who did vocals?
welz Nov 23, 2012

⚜Ꮶ͜иιɢн͡т⚜ wrote:
I would throw it in my iTunes! 👍 I think there is a whole heap of potential. Who did vocals?

Cheers buddy that means a lot! :)
That's my mate Benny B, he's a funny guy! Wanna b gangster still living at home, no job and nearly 30... Got a book full of good raps though! 😜
Ꮶ͜иιɢн͡т Nov 23, 2012

welz wrote:
⚜Ꮶ͜иιɢн͡т⚜ wrote:
I would throw it in my iTunes! 👍 I think there is a whole heap of potential. Who did vocals?

Cheers buddy that means a lot! :)
That's my mate Benny B, he's a funny guy! Wanna b gangster still living at home, no job and nearly 30... Got a book full of good raps though! 😜

No probs, I may just be imagining it but it sounds as if he might be forcing an accent to a degree, or maybe he needs to relax a bit more, dunno, no biggie, for a guy with no experience. 😉
I definitely think if you guys continue to put the effort in and get a selection of your best tracks on you tube, you could gain quite a following. 👍
Plus, the more you do the easier it'll become and the better you'll get. The track sounds pretty tight, you got any other recordings?

Honestly though, keep it up. Quit smoking , that shit'll kill you! 😊😝
welz Nov 23, 2012

Yea that's Benny alright, he is good at coming up with raps but needs to practice more, I keep telling him

We have got a few tracks but nothing concrete, I spent a lot of time on this one trying to get it right and sounding good, I've leaned a lot on the way so next time should be easier... 😄
༼ཋ༠ཧཧརསར༽ Nov 23, 2012

Id slap that in my 7series all day and im picky about my music! I couldnt hear the bass line clearly thru iphn speakers but ill play it in the beemer when i get hm n let u know! Anyways i can tell u put alot of wrk in to the beat u n ur boy both have talent that need to be recognized no doubt just make sure u put the same effort in to every track and definitely come see us out in the bay!
████ⓙʘⓔ████ Nov 23, 2012

That's pretty dope man👍your friend benny is quite a good lyricist, nice flow. and nice beat as well.
welz Nov 23, 2012

༼ཋ༠ཧཧརསར༽ wrote:

That's good to hear mate, thanks! 😃 With the bass I tried not to over kill it, a lot of people I know tend to put more on by default and I didn't want to drown out other noises... it is there thou just crank it up a little more 😃
welz Nov 23, 2012

◢☠jͥoͫƎ☠◣ wrote:
That's pretty dope man👍your friend benny is quite a good lyricist, nice flow. and nice beat as well.

Thanks mate, much appreciated 😄
adambomb Nov 23, 2012

I'm not a fan of rap, but I really enjoyed it. Keep it up.
M̴Ɇ₲ͥ₳₮ͣⱤͫØ₦ Nov 23, 2012

Lol boss sounds pretty good keep em coming