A Turf Wars influenced story
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Chapters are too short. This story is so damn interesting to me. Good job pro.
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creeper nate wrote:
Lol thanks Nate. Longer chapters could be an option. I right them in one sitting, and try to post one everyday. Plus u can only post so much at onceChapters are too short. This story is so damn interesting to me. Good job pro.
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Bravo senior.👏👏👏👏
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Benny DaBOSS🔫💀🌄 wrote:
Thank u señorBravo senior.👏👏👏👏
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huge writer props if you can work in 'ghetto monster' in without it sounding ridiculous.
it prolly cant be done tbh
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Ghetto Monstazz wrote:
Lol I've always loved a challengehuge writer props if you can work in 'ghetto monster' in without it sounding ridiculous.
it prolly cant be done tbh
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I changed my mind, add me if possible! Great read, keep it up!
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Chapter 6
I look around at the men. Each one unique in his own way. Yet they worked together so well together.
I stick out my hand. "it would be an honor to fight along side u."
Benny smiles and grasps my hand and the other guys cheer, even hank lends his voice.
Benny stands up and says, "u are one of us now. A couple more men will be coming in the next day or so. Tomorrow we will see what u can do. Tonight though, we feast!" the men stand up and cheer. Each one claps me on the back, each saying that they are glad to have me.
We make our way into the dining hall, and we eat the feast that is provided. We eat and drink and laugh for hours.
When each of us finally retire to our rooms, I am exhausted. I barely make it to the bed before I fall asleep.
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I wake up late the next morning. I climb out of bed and see a small basin filled with water. I walk over and splash some water on my face and shiver as the water hits my face. I see a pile of clean, new clothes with a note on top. I pick it up and read it. "I hope these fit. Your presence is requested in the main hall whenever is convenient. Your humble servant, Joe.
P.S. Bring your weapons"
I smile and put on the new clothes. A perfect fit.
I sling my swords behind my back and walk to the main room. I walk in and see the men, plus two more, eating. Benny sees me and gestures to the seat beside him and says something, though I can't understand what he said as the bacon in his mouth blocked it.
I smile and sit down beside Benny. Joe brings in a plate of bacon, fried eggs, and a glass of water. I thank him and dig in.
Cyrus gestures to the two new guys. "prom, this is Tech and Frosty. They arrived this morning. Boys, this is Prometheus, our new brother." they nod, and I return it.
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We finish eating and we all stand up. I take a second to look at tech and frosty. Tech stands about 6 ft tall, but built like an ox. His broad shoulders strain against his shirt. He has short brown hair and appears to be in his mid-thirties. His most striking feature is the scar that runs down the right side of his face from his eye to his jaw. Strapped to his waist are to long, nasty looking daggers.
Frosty stands shorter then me, though not by much. He is about 5'9, with shaggy brown hair. He has a bow and a quiver of arrows strapped to his back. He appears to be in his early teens.
The group sits on the couches and chairs, and aeo walks to the end of the room. He takes his spear off his belt and presses the button. It's makes a metallic clinking and it extends. He does the same with his shield and couches and brings his shield and spear up and pints them at me.
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I look at Benny and Cyrus. They both smile. I sigh and pull my swords out and bring them in front of me. Aeo gives a wicked grin and walks slowly towards me. "let's see what u got newbie"
I apologize for the time it took to post this. RL has been busy
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The story lives on!!!!
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Benny DaBOSS🔫💀🌄 wrote:
Great read!👍The story lives on!!!!
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Chapter 7
Aeo picks up speed and jumps towards the wall. He plants his foot on a ledge and launches himself into the air, yelling and thrusting his spear at my chest. I knock his spear away and roll to my left. Before I can stand back up he swings his shield at me, barely missing head.
I stand up and start attacking him. Alternating between left and right, he we engage in a back and forth battle. We both get good chances. We eventually start to tire. Aeo swings his spear at my throat. I lean back so it barely misses me. I spin and hit his shield with both my swords. He stumbles and I see my chance.
I slam the hilt of one of my swords into his back. He gasps and falls to the ground. His spear clatters across the stone floor. It's stops in front of hank, and he leans down and gives it a lick. The guys laugh and Cyrus pats him on the head.
Aeo stands up and dusts himself off. "you fight well Thracian", he says quietly. My eyes get wide and I say quietly, "how did u know?"
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"it's the way u fight. I've seen Thracian's in battle. They are terrifying warriors. Don't worry, I won't tell the others."
I sigh in relief and nod in thanks. Benny smiles and says, "u fight well prom. We will find many uses for u."
Joe comes in and clears his throat. Benny looks at him with annoyance. "what is it joe?"
"captain sheen requests audience." Benny sighs. "well lets find out what the captain of the guard wants. Send him in joe." joe nods and walks out.
Captain Sheen comes in shortly after. He stops in front of Benny and nods his head slightly. Benny returns it. "what can we do for u Captain?"
Sheen replies breathlessly, "Mudkip's men.... Are near the town. They ambushed some of my men... I came here as fast as I could." the men look at each other, Nate grins wickedly.
Benny looks at us. "well boys, it looks like we have some work to do."
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Bravo good story👏
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Should I continue it?
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PROJECT_HAWK23 wrote:
Could as easily be me 😉Am I the hawk 😏
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☬ᏢᎡᎾᎷᎬᎢᎻᎬᏌᎦ☬ wrote:
Heck ya!Should I continue it?
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Wow still didn put me in it ehh
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☬ᏢᎡᎾᎷᎬᎢᎻᎬᏌᎦ☬ wrote:
If you don't I will carbomb all your loot. 😡. 😊Should I continue it?
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!Charger! wrote:
I'm working on it. I got a bunch of people who want in. I will get to uWow still didn put me in it ehh
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creeper nate wrote:
Lol I'll keep that in mind☬ᏢᎡᎾᎷᎬᎢᎻᎬᏌᎦ☬ wrote:
If you don't I will carbomb all your loot. 😡. 😊Should I continue it?
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Chapter 8
The men rush around and grab their weapons, tighten their armor and stand in a lose semi-circle around Benny.
"Mudkip is getting bolder. His men have never been this far west before. We must show them their error!"
The men cheer and run outside, with me right behind them. What I see is a mess. Buildings are on fire. Bodies lay everywhere. Captain Sheen's men are fighting hard, but they are no match for Mudkips trained killers.
I spot one of Mudkips men kick a soldier in the chest, who falls to the ground. The Keeper, as I would later find out that's what Mudkips men were called, raised his sword to kill the man. Just as he brought the sword down, a arrow slams into his right shoulder. He drops the sword and looks around and sees Frosty with his bow drawing another arrow. He growls and takes a step forward. A arrow slams into his chest. He takes a couple weak steps forward and falls face first with a thud. Then men cheer and rush off in search of targets.
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Frosty climbs up onto one of the few buildings that isn't on fire and starts picking of Keepers.
Cyrus runs through the ranks of Keepers, his axe swinging wildly. Hank just on a Keeper, biting at his neck. Once Hank's sure he's dead, he jumps off and runs after another.
Aeo takes a running jump of a rock and swings his shield at a Keeper, who stumbles backwards and trips. Aeo thrusts his spear into the mans chest. He pulls it out and keeps running.
Benny and Carl fight right beside each other. Spinning, ducking, and fighting in perfect form.
Tech spins, rolls, and dodges, slicing whatever Keeper body parts aren't covered by armor.
Nate runs around poking people with his sword, never really doing any damage, other then distracting the Keepers, allowing the rest of us to take them down.
I run through the ranks of Keepers, slicing and hacking as I go. Then something slams into my chest. I fly backs and land hard on the ground. My swords fly out of my hand.
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I look up and see a huge man. Towering at almost 7 feet tall, he held in his had a large quarter staff. He grins wickedly and prepares to swing at my head.
Then I hear a war cry, in a very gruff voice. The giant turns and looks behind him. He laughs when he see's a dwarf, standing maybe 4 feet tall, with a battle axe charging at him. Realizing the dwarf would have no chance, I reach into my boot and pull out my knife. I aim and throw it. It hits the giant in the back of the knee. His yells in pain and surprise, and his knee buckles. While he's distracted, the dwarf closes the distance, and with a yell, leaps into the air, burying his axe deep into the giants chest. The giant stands there stunned for a second. The he growls and swings at the dwarf with his arm, hitting him square in the chest.
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The dwarf flies about ten feet, lands, then rolls another five. The rest of the men form a line in front of me, weapons raised and ready. The giant looks at us, then jogs to a horse and rides off.
Frosty hands me my swords and I nod in thanks.
Benny rushes over to the dwarf. His breathing is ragged and shallow. Benny starts yelling orders to the soldiers, who rush around putting fires out and tending to the wounded. Carl and Cyrus pick up the dwarf and we all walk back to the manor.
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Looks like this next chapter is going to have me in it yeah. Thanks Prometheus
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Replace the "U"s with "You"s and the story will be better.
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ⱣλБŁΩ🔫🌊🗻 wrote:
Damnit. I've been screwing up stuff like that all weekReplace the "U"s with "You"s and the story will be better.
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