Anyone like poetry?

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JohnnySledge Aug 11, 2010

I wrote this poem for my girlfriend

Dawn winds down
Opening the shutters of the night sky
Twilight is upon us

Wispering through the trees
Raindrops on my window
Thoughts crossing my mind
Like a jet dancing accross the sky

I see you
I love you
I hold my breath
Until I can hold you in my arms
I close my eyes
Until I can see your eyes
Pearing into mine

Your my castle
My bank vault
You hold my love in your heart
And I hold yours
__Don_Line__ Aug 11, 2010

Oh... My love for you...
Is like diarrhea to a skunk...
Smelly, dirty and of topic
I love it when you say ick!
βΣ∠†Σ₫  Aug 11, 2010

Take this to the skinny jeans thread. You'll fit right in there.
O-Dogg Aug 11, 2010

βΣ∠†Σ₫ 💺⚡💀 wrote:
Take this to the skinny jeans thread. You'll fit right in there.

👍 btw sledge did u see her whispering eye yet?
JohnnySledge Aug 11, 2010

O-Dogg wrote:
βΣ∠†Σ₫ 💺⚡💀 wrote:
Take this to the skinny jeans thread. You'll fit right in there.

👍 btw sledge did u see her whispering eye yet?
Yea on many occasions
Primo Loco Aug 11, 2010

~|LINE|~ wrote:
Oh... My love for you...
Is like diarrhea to a skunk...
Smelly, dirty and of topic
I love it when you say ick!

WTF ROFLMFAOOL it went from somethin beautiful to somethin all nasty 😹
Dw Johnny it was beautiful bro don't listen to em haterz
JohnnySledge Aug 11, 2010

Primo Loco wrote:
~|LINE|~ wrote:
Oh... My love for you...
Is like diarrhea to a skunk...
Smelly, dirty and of topic
I love it when you say ick!

WTF ROFLMFAOOL it went from somethin beautiful to somethin all nasty 😹
Dw Johnny it was beautiful bro don't listen to em haterz

Thanx
__Don_Line__ Aug 11, 2010

But great poem BTW.
JohnnySledge Aug 12, 2010

~|LINE|~ wrote:
But great poem BTW.

Ty
__Don_Line__ Aug 12, 2010

I was just feeling pissed at that moment...
JohnnySledge Aug 12, 2010

~|LINE|~ wrote:
I was just feeling pissed at that moment...

yea, I can see that lol
HydroChaz Aug 12, 2010

I don't really read poetry but I like writing it.
JohnnySledge Aug 12, 2010

HydroChaz wrote:
I don't really read poetry but I like writing it.

I read and write. Mostly write
PSALM40 Aug 12, 2010

👍👍👍👍👍
O-Dogg Aug 12, 2010

JohnnySledge wrote:
O-Dogg wrote:
βΣ∠†Σ₫ 💺⚡💀 wrote:
Take this to the skinny jeans thread. You'll fit right in there.

👍 btw sledge did u see her whispering eye yet?
Yea on many occasions
that poem was worth it then!! 👉👌🙏..
JohnnySledge Aug 12, 2010

O-Dogg wrote:
JohnnySledge wrote:
O-Dogg wrote:
βΣ∠†Σ₫ 💺⚡💀 wrote:
Take this to the skinny jeans thread. You'll fit right in there.

👍 btw sledge did u see her whispering eye yet?
Yea on many occasions
that poem was worth it then!! 👉👌🙏..
lol worth what?
O-Dogg Aug 12, 2010

JohnnySledge wrote:
O-Dogg wrote:
JohnnySledge wrote:
O-Dogg wrote:
βΣ∠†Σ₫ 💺⚡💀 wrote:
Take this to the skinny jeans thread. You'll fit right in there.

👍 btw sledge did u see her whispering eye yet?
Yea on many occasions
that poem was worth it then!! 👉👌🙏..
lol worth what?
worth the effort.. Honestly, I wouldn't confess my love to just ANY girl.. Some girls take it as power and walk all over u.. Either way I personaly don't give 2 shits what happens it's life ya kno? Idk I slept in today. I shoulda been at work since 8!! I just woke up😝
O-Dogg Aug 12, 2010

Dont take affence to that👆👆
just kinda saying lifea to short to worry about mistakes or aomethibg like that
Primo Loco Aug 12, 2010

O-Dogg wrote:
Dont take affence to that👆👆
just kinda saying lifea to short to worry about mistakes or aomethibg like that

u said u were supposed to be at work by 8....what time us it where u are right now?
O-Dogg Aug 12, 2010

Primo Loco wrote:
O-Dogg wrote:
Dont take affence to that👆👆
just kinda saying lifea to short to worry about mistakes or aomethibg like that

u said u were supposed to be at work by 8....what time us it where u are right now?
it was like 10:30-11:00 at that time.
JohnnySledge Aug 12, 2010

O-Dogg wrote:
JohnnySledge wrote:
O-Dogg wrote:
JohnnySledge wrote:
O-Dogg wrote:
βΣ∠†Σ₫ 💺⚡💀 wrote:
Take this to the skinny jeans thread. You'll fit right in there.

👍 btw sledge did u see her whispering eye yet?
Yea on many occasions
that poem was worth it then!! 👉👌🙏..
lol worth what?
worth the effort.. Honestly, I wouldn't confess my love to just ANY girl.. Some girls take it as power and walk all over u.. Either way I personaly don't give 2 shits what happens it's life ya kno? Idk I slept in today. I shoulda been at work since 8!! I just woke up😝
she's not justany girl.
👊ADD JAYK👊 Aug 12, 2010

~|LINE|~ wrote:
Oh... My love for you...
Is like diarrhea to a skunk...
Smelly, dirty and of topic
I love it when you say ick!

LMFAO
mr joble Aug 12, 2010

Roses are straight,
Violets are twisted,
Brace yourself luv,
Your about to get fisted !
The Noise Aug 12, 2010

mr joble wrote:
Roses are straight,
Violets are twisted,
Brace yourself luv,
Your about to get fisted !

lmao!
Violets are blue
Roses are Red
Suck me off bitch
or you will be dead!
jk
JohnnySledge Aug 13, 2010

Long live the king
Watch him preach
Watch him sing

What kind of king are you?
Vicious
Unkind
Cruel

I will not be your deciple anymore
This oppression you impose
Crushing all hopes of finding a door

Over ruled you will be
Soon a new king will take the lead
While your people watch you hang
Watch you bleed
JohnnySledge Aug 13, 2010

YOU wrote:
Long live the king
Watch him preach
Watch him sing

What kind of king are you?
Vicious
Unkind
Cruel

I will not be your deciple anymore
This oppression you impose
Crushing all hopes of finding a door

Over ruled you will be
Soon a new king will take the lead
While your people watch you hang
Watch you bleed

not about my gf btw