📖The Daily Read📖 🔑The Key🔑
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Written by me:
Brandon T. Huffman -
Type: Fiction
Genre: Mystery
-----------------------(dark, snowy environment)
(John, and his girlfriend, Bella)Bella: Baby, I told you she was crazy.
John: I guess you were right, for once..
Bella: Ha! And what's that supposed to mean hmm?
John: Shoot, you know what I mean!
Bella: I hope it's not what I think it is... (Depressing tone)
John: What's that babe?
Bella: Are you breaking up with me..?
John: Of course not! Why would I be? (Surprised)
Bella: You're not arguing with me for once!
John: Why would I argue with what she did! She was really crazy, I mean, that southern accent she had, with the dirt in her hair.
Bella: That's my mother you're talking about!
John: I'm sorry.. Anyways, what a beautiful night it is eh?
Bella: I know baby, I wish we could do these kind of things all the time. -
I don't get it.
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John: Well, maybe if your dad wasn't so strict we would be able to do these things all the time!
Bella: I know, but he's getting very ill, causing him to be even more strict.
Bella: And you know he locks the windows and doors every night.
John: *Sigh* I know, why can't he just understand that I love you?
Bella: I've told him that I love you, but he just can't trust you.
(Pause)
John: What do you mean he doesn't trust me..?
Bella: I don't know, he just doesn't seem to think that you're fit for being my boyfriend.
John: *Turns away*
Bella: What's wrong?
(Pause)
Bella: Babe, what's wrong!?
John: I'm thinking...
Bella: About..? -
John: Nothing, just nothing.
Bella: It's getting late, we should go.(Setting: Bella's house)
Bella's Mother: Well, it's just about damn time you to get back! What were y'all doing out there?
Bella: We were just talking..
Bella's Mother: Well talk faster, you know how your dad is. He locks the doors at exactly 10:00 P.M . You two could've been stranded all night. And the only way of getting in is from the key, which your father has.Bella: I know mother, it won't happen again.'
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(Setting: Bella's bedroom)
John: I'm so tired of your parents getting up in our business!
Bella: I'm sorry baby, but you know all they do is care.
John: Well, why can't you just come stay at my house?
Bella: I can't my father checks my room every night, and if he catches anyone other than me he uses the 12. Gauge
John: What if I just sneak in your room with out him noticing and we have a little fun?
Bella: Is that all you think about?
John: It's the only thing I ever can think about when I talk to you.
Bella: I kno- (Bellas' mother interrupts)
Bella's Mother: Bella! Is that boy still here?
Bella: Yes mom!
Bella's Mother: Well he best be hurrying on out of here, the power normally shuts down at this time of the year!
Bella: Ugh, Yes ma'am..
Bella: I'm sorry baby, you have to go.. (Sad tone)
John: It's okay sweetheart, I'll see you soon. *Kisses goodbye* -
(Setting: Phone)
John: *Calling Bella*
Bella: *Answers in a mellow way* "Hello...?"
John: Hey baby, it's John.
Bella: Oh hey, look.. right now is not the time to talk, my electricity is randomly shutting off.. I'll have to call you tommorow.
John: I'm sick of this baby, I just want to see you again.
Bella: You can see me tonight, just leave in about an hour or so, promise I'll be hear waiting for you.
John: Okay baby, I'll see you soon. -
Continue
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WHy don't u post it in notes and when ur done copy and paste it one section at a time so we don't have to wait.
It's killing me. -
Bella: Wait! Babe.
John: Yes?
Bella: The key will be under the window seal.
John: I thought your dad carried the key?
Bella: I took it from his dresser while he was sleeping.
John: Okay babe, I'll see you later.
Bella: Ok, love you. -
(Setting: Bella's house.)
Bella's Mother: Bella! The power is fixing to go out, we need to go to the store and get a new generator. Can you help me?
Bella: Mom, please. I don't want to go.
Bella's Mother: No sweetie! I need you to help me drive.
Bella: Ugh, fine mom.. But let's hurry.
Bella's Mother: It's only going to take fifteen minutes.
*Power Goes out*Bella's Mother: Ok Bella, we need to go now. The power's out!
Bella: Be right there!(Bella, and her mother exit the house and drive off)
*Power goes on four minutes later*
*Bella's Father wakes up*
Bella's Father: *Cough* Baby! You there? Anyone?
(Setting: Bella's window)
John: *Picks the key up*
John: *Unlocks the window, and opens it*
John: *Crawls in*(Setting: Bella's house)
Bella's father: Where the hell is my key!
*John hears him*
*Power shuts down*
Bella's father: *Picks up the 12. Gauge, and a candle.*
Bella's Father: Who's there?
*Cocks the 12. Gauge*
John: *Confused, and scared* -
John: *Arms himself with a rock*
Bella's Father: *Walks quietly into Bella's bedroom*
John: *Hiding behind the door*
Bella's Father: *Finds the key on the floor*
Bella's Father: Who ever is here, and dosen't fess up, you will be fired upon!
*Bella's father places candle on the floor*
*Bella's father leaves the room*
John: *Sneaks across the room, drops the and crawls back out the window.*Bella's father: *Places the candle on the floor*
John: *Moves from under the covers, drops them on the floor, and exits slowly out the window.* -
Please commence
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(Setting: Turning on the next street.)
Bella: Mom, I'm sorry we couldn't find that generator. Guess we'll ha- (Bella's mother interrupts)
Bella's Mother: Oh my GOD! The House!!!!!!(Setting: Morning arrives, John's house)
John: *Grabs the sunday paper*
The paper reads:
-Breaking News-
"Family burns in house fire"
John: *Runs to Bella's house*
*Notices house is on fire*
John: *Bursts into tears*
John: *Walks to the front yard, and notices a shiny object*
John: *Picks it up, and notices, it was "the key"The End..
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Mystery: How did the house burn down?
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Degradable Z wrote:
I understand that it's just I wish they would have met up again or something .....Mystery: How did the house burn down?
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KING OF TURF wrote:
Well, I could have gone in more depth.Degradable Z wrote:
I understand that it's just I wish they would have met up again or something .....Mystery: How did the house burn down?
Details:
Bella and mom try to save Bella's father from the fire, yet they both get trapped and parish in the flames.
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Degradable Z wrote:
THE CANDLE THINGY :)Mystery: How did the house burn down?
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🅱🅾🅱 [ADD 304] wrote:
Correct!Degradable Z wrote:
THE CANDLE THINGY :)Mystery: How did the house burn down?
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Degradable Z wrote:
Ohhh that makes more sense.KING OF TURF wrote:
Well, I could have gone in more depth.Degradable Z wrote:
I understand that it's just I wish they would have met up again or something .....Mystery: How did the house burn down?
Details:
Bella and mom try to save Bella's father from the fire, yet they both get trapped and parish in the flames.
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Candle
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Please give me feedback, I'd like to know what I need to improve on.
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How could the newspaper report on a burning joke while the home is burning? Or maybe I read that wrong
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⚡☀⚡Clone9786⚡☀⚡ wrote:
I believe you did, he read it in the morning.How could the newspaper report on a burning joke while the home is burning? Or maybe I read that wrong
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New story published at 7:30 PM
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Well it was Jon's fault. It seems
He dropped the blankets on a dam candle -
Correct 👆
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