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“The altar” He coughed as he recovered. “Its power is what brought you here, through an entrance such as a cave”
“Or door…” I finished, surprised to see him comply with my hollow threat. I could use this to my advantage. But before I could do anything a howling wind drew forth.
“At last, DEADNIGHT!” Phoenix, embracing the wind “Let the spirits of the damned rise once more, SEIZE HIM!”
As he spoke figures began to spawn from the darkness, pale spectres. Some were sailors, some were soldiers, men women and children; all of their dilated, crazed eyes on me. -
“Help me!” Anne screamed in desperation.
“Anne” I replied weakly.
I tried to move but realised that a spindly man and ragged woman had grasped my arms. I kicked and struggled but they overwhelmed me, they took the dagger and pinned me to the altar. I tried to move but felt cold metal against my neck. Phoenix was loomed over me, he dismissed the ghosts. Then began to read from the encryptions on the altar: -
“When life is lived fulfil your fate, or face the fire at hells gate” Suddenly the encryptions began to glow, and the altar’s surface with it. I saw doors and arches, windows and tunnels come into view, my spirits rose as I saw the old wall of the house not far away.
“There must be another way” I pleaded. “Please Phoenix” But he wasn’t listening, he was chanting under his breath, but still held the knife firmly to my neck. -
There was still a spark of hope; Phoenix seemed to have completely forgotten about Anne, out of the corner of my eye she was on her feet. The anger in her eyes could kill, and I wouldn’t put it past her. But then he finished.
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“Prepare to experience eternity in limbo, for today marks your death, and my re-birth, Morgan” Phoenix whispered calmly in my ear. Blood pounded through my body as Phoenix took one more deep breath, but before he could finish Anne appeared out of nowhere, grabbed Phoenix by his hair and pulled him to the ground, he howled in pain and wrestled with Anne. I rolled off the table and stood, poised and ready, then lunged at him, taking from him the dagger, I never will forget my next act. Grabbing Him by the neck I drove the dagger deep in to his heart, he immediately withheld his grip on Anne, I forced him down. His blank face stared up at me. His eyes dull and lifeless.
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“Damn you, damn you to hell” He managed to rasp as he coughed up blood. He then relaxed and lay there, unmoving. Dead.
I stood up, shaking, and then lifted Anne to sit on the altar, The wound was still bleeding, but not too serious.
“I killed a man” I said in disbelief.
“He was never really alive” Said Anne solemnly.
“Are you-?”
“I’m fine” She said, composing herself.
There was an awkward tension between us, but we both knew. Time to leave. -
We said a sad goodbye. Likely never to see each other again, this very encounter. Probably nothing but a legend in years to come. Then we both took our separate ways, me: Back through the same door; Anne through a small stone archway. I waved a tearful goodbye and once more embraced my fog-filled world. Then began the walk back to my car. What a night, a night to remember.
🇬🇧🇬🇧🇬🇧That was "Blessed Hollow" By PhoenixElite🇬🇧🇬🇧🇬🇧
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Just read the hunger games
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I'm not in a writing mood right now.....
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PhoenixElite wrote:
👏👏👏 fun to read :)🇬🇧🇬🇧🇬🇧That was "Blessed Hollow" By PhoenixElite🇬🇧🇬🇧🇬🇧
... They didn't have to say goodbye in the end 😢 -
PhoenixElite wrote:
Awww... They should have gotten married... 😥😥 otherwise it was great!!! 😃😃We said a sad goodbye. Likely never to see each other again, this very encounter. Probably nothing but a legend in years to come. Then we both took our separate ways, me: Back through the same door; Anne through a small stone archway. I waved a tearful goodbye and once more embraced my fog-filled world. Then began the walk back to my car. What a night, a night to remember.
🇬🇧🇬🇧🇬🇧That was "Blessed Hollow" By PhoenixElite🇬🇧🇬🇧🇬🇧
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MOUNTAIN TIME
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Cheers guys I'm really happy about this, it was an English assessment btw. Oh and yes they could have been married etc but that would create another loose end, which you don't want in a short story... Or do you...
And those have you might have noticed the guy called Phoenix, now look at my name :D
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Sorry if it's a little depressing...
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Pity
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See hatchet
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What's that?
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Baron wins.
Pheinox second. -
Tiger113 wrote:
Baron didn't post here...Baron wins.
Pheinox second.
And Phoenix made a great story :) -
BARON personal Messaged me
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My story was intended to see what the response was for an English project hence why it didn't match the original criteria, and congrats baron 🎉🎉🎉
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